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Hello here is the first installment to soulless shell
Peter: I'm wondering when the title's going to show up.
Jason: Yeah, if that was the title, it'd be capitalized.
Paige: Prologue what?
My name is Leif melyamos I am a half blood a crimson king and ruler of jackal's half bloods and rats
Jason: Oh, great, a Furry.
I am not like the others I with grey fur and red eyes had to lead a group of blood thirsty murderers and thieves to rule the planet
Peter: Yeah, I'm just their leader. It's not like I could tell them to STOP KILLING PEOPLE.
but back then that was not what I wanted I wanted peace a place where all races could live in harmony and well being a place where children would not have to hide in fear of many nightmares to come my name is Leif and this is my story.
Jason: So, it's the story of his failure?
Paige: What a downer.
Hi this is the next installment of soulless shell review
Peter: Ah, it's just a review. That explains the lack of a plot.
Soulless shell chapter 1
Peter: Ha, ha, ha.
A little child was running down the streets of his village he had grey fur and strange red eyes that seemed they could pierce through the toughest metal he skidded into his home
Jason: Lather, rinse, repeat. Got it.
Im home he announced happily
His mother a jolly looking young mouse said hi honey how was school
Oh it was fun momma whats for dinner
(out side the home a few rats had gathered outside the home) a huge rat came up and looked through a crack at the young half blood in the home eating one look at his eyes
Peter: Wait...what is he eating?
was all he needed .
this is the crimson king my minions
Jason: The only way to stop him is to go back in time and prevent Stephen King from -
Paige: Wrong 'Crimson King', Jason.
we will enter this home kill all opposition and grab the boy .
Yes sir the rats replied!
Leifs mother heard noises in the kitchen so she went in to investigate five seconds later life and his father heard a scream
Leif grabbed his tiny dagger and ran inside his father
Peter: Must be pretty cramped in there.
did like wize with his blade they skidded in to find his mother bleeding on the floor mommy he screamed as large gusts of wind emanated semmeingly from his body
Jason: So they didn't really emanate? Lame.
then the rats suroounded his father and beat him down Leif hid in the attic.
Where is he look harder
Peter: Wait...is the author ordering us around?
Leif ran down to his father who was on the floor bleeding son you must know this later when you one day return here (shares a whisper in Leifs ear
Paige: Daddy, I have to take a whisper.
) you will know then goodbye and remember I ….love you
Daddy then he was seized by rough paws as he was dragged out of his former home.
wacko2 and Jason wrote:So this is a MSTing of a bad fanfic?
kay people here is chapter 2 every one cry now for Leif '(
Peter: A horrifying, one-eyed mutant smiley. Yesss....
Soulless shell chapter 2
Stop where are you taking me Leif demanded.
Please settle down my lord every thing will be revealed to you in time.
Jason: NO bad writer tells me to calm down, you hear?
Leif's eyes widened at this statement a lord to whom.
To all present here my lord now please get on your paws.
Leif did as he was bade he stared across at a large rat who had stationed himself just across the way
Jason: Get ready, kid, cause I'm gonna GRAPE you in the mouth!
Ahhh he exclaimed I greet you my lord crimson king he and all others around him bowed to Leif .
Ummm excuse me sir in what way am I a king im just a poor boy whose parents you killed he exclaimed angrily.
I had to my lord they were keeping that secret from you for too long now it is time to take your place among your people and subjects.
Now here take this blade and follow me
But sir it looks awfully heavy
Oh pick it up young master
Leif picked it up it was surprisingly light in his paws wow he exclaimed
Peter: He rubbed the sword. Up and down. Over and over.
(Paige slaps Peter)
Now follow my lead I have to really make sure you are the crimson king he explained drawing his blade. Now hold your ground he called out.
Leif held his blade at the ready as the rat rushed at him inflicting a stinging blow to the arm!
Ahhh Leif yelled then suddenly he felt a rising anger in his chest his eyes went from red to black as he dashed at the rat inflicting many harsh blows apon his attacker then he shot a beam from his paw which the rat teleported away from
Paige: Wait a minute, what?
then he got in front of Leif and placed a paw on his head whispering to him to relax.
Gradually he did when he was out of his powerful state he became very dizzy ohhh what happened.
Paige: Not a word, Peter...
You proved to every one present that you are the crimson king now come my lord there is much to do.
He turned to the rat and said sir what is your name?
The rat turned halfway and replied karas young master as they walked away he thought goodbye.
Peter: Good, this chapter's finished. Let's get out of here.
(all three exit the theater)
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